Just Kristin

• Char­ac­ters that are either all good or all evil
• A story that shows one view­point or group as either all good or all evil
• Dull or unimag­i­na­tive or overly-cliche verbiage
• Empha­sis on the mun­dane w/o offer­ing a new viewpoint
• Too much descrip­tion of any one thing, no mat­ter how artful
• Flat, life­less, change­less characters
• Either all-lovable or all-unlovable characters
• Too much input from the nar­ra­tor if he is not one of the characters
• Too much predictability
• Com­plete lack of predictability

This is it for now…still a work in progress.

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